-Elijah sit during redneck scene
-Peyton don't touch the curtains when you get drinks –
Peyton your lines are too choppy –
you cannot make sounds backstage especially behind the
flag –
mac don't react before Sydney finished framed line
-maybe mac and Sydney roll off trunk while making out –
Sydney when you say goodbye hugh, make it sound a little
sad -keep working on line I swear I'll kill him first –
kadyn you cannot move your arms out from your side every
time you want to show emotion . Louder humming after 2nd jack scene –
Brodie when you pull away from kadyn make us believe you
really don't want to –
Mac say "everything's fine" more as a torment
to Brodie –
Ashlyn try something different with the Monty was your
father scene. You seem to young and not sad enough –
beat after 2nd shot before you move
We still all need characterization and I know I'm one of the worst. we all have to be different and CREATE our character.
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