In redneck scene we are too heavy on USL. Song was good in funeral scene. "Shall we gather" could be louder though. "I'm gonna kill him" did not seem like a threat. BBQ scene is balanced well. Watch straight line in BBQ. I need to work on sitting on other side of bench in first Jack and Adam scene, it looked awkward. Wait for snap then freeze, don't anticipate! I need to remember to grab scrapbook. Hospital crowd made no noise! Everyone needs to work on southern accent, it sounds like plain English and then someone will say "stock". I need to work on in sherrif scene being "suthun" instead of "southERn". Singing is really good in all scenes. Gunshot in suicide was amazing! Singing before murder scene needs to be louder. Need to work on reacting to being shot.
ashlynn needs to be louder on her first line. everyone needs to be faster during the first transition and more happy. Jonah needs to hold up the newspaper longer during the redneck scene. Pretend there are bugs in the redneck scene and crowd scenes. those are the perfect times for us to show the location and the climate of our play. brooke needs to walk in the funeral scene with an umbrella! Make sure everyone is frozen during funeral part because it looks bad if one person moves. Sydney be louder when you say "ain't it awful". There is a SEMI CIRCLE DURING FIRST SPEECH. what's going on with Adam and Jack scene?? there were no flashes during the picture. Tristian don't being flags out during the scene. we are anticipating the flashes and I think it ruins it. I love them but we have to perfect it. tucker don't introduce yourself because Brodie does and it sounds wierd if you say it too many times. floating newspaper??? lol
Tristian and Jonah more people noises during the redneck scene when you first walk in Jonah say your first line faster in the good speech Tucker take the scrapbook Don't move the flags during the scene Don't anticipate the flashes during the hospital speech Tucker why are you randomly standing there Brodie have busy work during Adam's and Willie's scene Louder on sing humpy dumbty at end Left stage in heavy at the end
Kadyn blocks Payton in the beginning I need to slow down Typing sounds bad NO people noises from the rednecks Tucker is all profile as the sheriff Austin is the only one who is feeling bugs Austin and Jonah are blocked There is a long delay between the redneck scene the next scene Thunder is really loud You can see Austin catch Brooke Singing sounds good You can see some people moving during the freeze Payton just leavess Mac on the stage Mac needs to cheat more Sydney needs to be louder "You've been framed" Sydney suddenly starts flirting with him during that last line Girls all walk really loudly Really straight line during good speech Why did Payton suddenly put down her sign after Mac's line about it? Sign is moving during freeze Moving the bench is really loud Really long pause between "I quit" and the next scene Tucker's jacket is really awkward Lost the end of Sydney's line "Caught with his finger..." Andrew is completely profile Strikers need to be louder and have more Sydney is completely profile Brodie putting his leg on the chair looks really staged Sydney seducing him is really good Transition to hospital speech is long and quiet Can not hear oohs in the beginning Why was there a flash of blue light across the flag? Kadyn is talking upstage Kadyn is completely profile Transition before Two Timing needs to be faster Sydney and Brodie are both entirely profile Really good freeze Kadyn Brodie is profile again We lose the end of Mac's line about air conditioning Jonah is profile Why is Tucker randomly standing in the back? Sydney needs to cross at her ankles Brodie and Tucker are all profile Tucker's line about "lions and tigers" seems rehearsed Tucker has a noodle arm for a moment Be more happy about Tucker accepting the job Brodie react more to "I think he killed himself" Quiet setting props and set on stage Maky turning in her chair looks staged Maky gets really quite sometimes Why is Austin not in the light? Floating newspaper? Austin is talking upstage Really good suicide Ashlynn is too quiet Ashlynn suddenly gained an deeper accent during her second line Austin needs to be louder during his monologue Mac is too quiet Brooke almost fell Tucker's corpse is blocked by Sydney at the end
In the good speech there is a line, keep signs from swaying, still a pause of sound when willie is coming in during the flashes, random flags, everyone including me had our acsents here and there and lost them all of a sudden, a huge pause before hospital speech, Sadie and Jack scene could have stated a little faster,Jake and Willie take to long in their short conversation, good job Jack and Sadie for smoking took to long getting to Adam, Jack. no one is acting like its hot in the second half of the play, Adam and his blank sheet of paper,good gunshot,
Snaps need to be more peppy. I need to pull more anger into my line.i also need to be more emotional in the funeral scene. Be more of a crowd. The hue scene drags. Good singing.ending was awesome!
Stage picture after the funeral scene was good songs all sounded a little quiet jack Adam and Anne's first scene was awkward his truth was marching on was awkward transitions were rough
If you cant hum high enough, don’t hum at all during humpty dumpty ( just during the high part) Heavy left stage during redneck scene Louder at the beginning of shall we gather at the river Bigger reaction to us being called a hick We are in a line at the good speech We need “the governor” during the first flash Protesting needs to be longer! Accents Hospital transition was awful. Jonah don’t trip on the chair Quieter glass setting before judge scene Be more mad during “Maybe Im trying to protect myself Look out into the crowd and decide to kill myself Be louder on last humpty dumpty
Tucker is blocking maky's sign at beginning Andrew- you look not sweaty Brodie- "pinch em in the soft place" when you say it first, make stand out so when you say it a second time, people remember it Everyone- be happy at the picnic laugh, talk, and murmur Austin and Tristian- cross when Mac says "tell you a story" so there isn't a shadow on macs face while he's taking Ashlynn- good at making different characters Nathan- be angrier when you hit clipboard Jonah- no hats in office Everyone- react to resignation Impeachers- other people gripe other than woody and Austin Sydnie- beginning of "two timing" line be stronger Jonah- under the table beer?? And react to "not a penny of it" Brodie- watch Jonah and Mac fight and laugh Tucker- you look silly with the big tie Brodie- big evidence with "a letter" Tucker- no big weird movements in the back
Snaps need to be more energetic. Woody don't sway so much during redneck scene. Funeral scene needs to show more emotion nobody looks like they are truly sad they lost so many innocent children. When it rains and y'all put down the umbrellas shake them a little bit so they can "dry". I forgot the lights I was helping them change :(. A line is going on in the drunk speech. Maki don't let the sign move when you are frozen. Protesters are not mad enough. Payton don't have sign in front of face during hospital speech we can't see your face.
make sure brooks sign doesn't block Ashlynn at the beginning
People noises before bbq scene it is really awkward
Line/semi circle in bbq scene
Sign frozen in bbq scene (mine)
Adams jacket looks awkward
Entrance to the hospital scene is very delayed, it's after "he can't do without me" be loud sound gets lost, and have people noises all the way until we start humming
Humpty dumpty needs to be louder before kill scene
•heels more quiet • humming needs to be together�� •some accents are thicker than others. It sounds kinda weird but I don't know if it's bad •I think we can shave off some time of we step on each other's lines a bit better •during the play we talk to the same people each crowd scene and I know I'm bad at that. So we need to talk to different people each time •crowd scenes in a line •more excitement in crowds •I ❤️ The photo scenes!!!! •the Hue scene drags.... •some transitions are poop •more contact with people •stand up straight!!!(I'm prob the worst) •more feeling during heart felt scenes!!!!!! •Brody sounds mean but doesn't look mean •judge scene is heart felt but drags •Ashlynn needs to be more sad but good accent -Brooke
Brodie dont be facing mac before your first line so you have to suddenly have to turn around. alot of people are anticipating their lines Payton and mac give a full hug and not just a side hug show the heat Sadie be flirty in the way you walk Brodie practice the song Crowd needs to be chatting more Kadyn needs to be farther back when she fixes her makeup Kadyn needs to be more comfortable walking in heels! Mac stand still you are being wobbly on your feet Brodie work on having a softer voice when talking to girls Brodie you are profile the whole time during the two timing scene Jonah don't go back to look behind the flag Kadyn keep your feet together even while sitting on the desk Brodie why did you lean you head so far back? If you have a trench coat on take it off it is hot Brodie you are only moving you hands below your waist Sadie find something to do besides put your cigar in your mouth Maky be more shaky Brodie let us see your reaction to killing your father in yoir body language Jacob you are slouched and it does not look good!
Ladies shoes are really loud Brodie dont be facing mac before your first line so you have to suddenly have to turn around Jonah you were anticipating your line Brodie you lost your accent... Keep it constant everyone! Okay, alot of people are anticipating their lines Payton and mac give a full hug and not just a side hug, show your love for one another Brodie i do not see you showing the heat Everyone is running in then like halfway yall all slow down Sadie be flirty in the way you walk Brodie practice the last note of the its you I'm thinking of... Crowd needs to be chatting where we can barely hear it all throughout the crowd scenes Crowd was not being very enthusiastic Nathan your pisture is getting better! Kadyn needs to be farther back when she fixes her makeup Kadyn needs to be more comfortable walking in heels! Mac stand still you are being wobbly on your feet Brodie work on having a softer voice when talking to girls Brodie you are profile the whole time during the two timing scene Jonah don't go back to look behind the flag Kadyn keep your feet together even while sitting on the desk Brodie why did you lean you head so far back? If you have a trench coat on take it off it is hot Brodie you are only moving you hands below your waist Sadie find something to do besides put your cigar in your mouth every two seconds Maky be more shaky Brodie let us see your reaction to killing your father in yoir body language Jacob you are slouched and it does not look good!
Ladies shoes are really loud Brodie dont be facing mac before your first line so you have to suddenly have to turn around Jonah you were anticipating your line Brodie you lost your accent... Keep it constant everyone! Okay, alot of people are anticipating their lines Payton and mac give a full hug and not just a side hug, show your love for one another Brodie i do not see you showing the heat Everyone is running in then like halfway yall all slow down Sadie be flirty in the way you walk Brodie practice the last note of the its you I'm thinking of... Crowd needs to be chatting where we can barely hear it all throughout the crowd scenes Crowd was not being very enthusiastic Nathan your pisture is getting better! Kadyn needs to be farther back when she fixes her makeup Kadyn needs to be more comfortable walking in heels! Mac stand still you are being wobbly on your feet Brodie work on having a softer voice when talking to girls Brodie you are profile the whole time during the two timing scene Jonah don't go back to look behind the flag Kadyn keep your feet together even while sitting on the desk Brodie why did you lean you head so far back? If you have a trench coat on take it off it is hot Brodie you are only moving you hands below your waist Sadie find something to do besides put your cigar in your mouth every two seconds Maky be more shaky Brodie let us see your reaction to killing your father in yoir body language Jacob you are slouched and it does not look good!
Kadyn blocks Payton in the beginning I need to slow down Typing sounds bad NO people noises from the rednecks Tucker is all profile as the sheriff Austin is the only one who is feeling bugs Austin and Jonah are blocked There is a long delay between the redneck scene the next scene Thunder is really loud You can see Austin catch Brooke Singing sounds good You can see some people moving during the freeze Payton just leavess Mac on the stage Mac needs to cheat more Sydney needs to be louder "You've been framed" Sydney suddenly starts flirting with him during that last line Girls all walk really loudly Really straight line during good speech Why did Payton suddenly put down her sign after Mac's line about it? Sign is moving during freeze Moving the bench is really loud Really long pause between "I quit" and the next scene Tucker's jacket is really awkward Lost the end of Sydney's line "Caught with his finger..." Andrew is completely profile Strikers need to be louder and have more Sydney is completely profile Brodie putting his leg on the chair looks really staged Sydney seducing him is really good Transition to hospital speech is long and quiet Can not hear oohs in the beginning Why was there a flash of blue light across the flag? Kadyn is talking upstage Kadyn is completely profile Transition before Two Timing needs to be faster Sydney and Brodie are both entirely profile Really good freeze Kadyn Brodie is profile again We lose the end of Mac's line about air conditioning Jonah is profile Why is Tucker randomly standing in the back? Sydney needs to cross at her ankles Brodie and Tucker are all profile Tucker's line about "lions and tigers" seems rehearsed Tucker has a noodle arm for a moment Be more happy about Tucker accepting the job Brodie react more to "I think he killed himself" Quiet setting props and set on stage Maky turning in her chair looks staged Maky gets really quite sometimes Why is Austin not in the light? Floating newspaper? Austin is talking upstage Really good suicide Ashlynn is too quiet Ashlynn suddenly gained an deeper accent during her second line Austin needs to be louder during his monologue Mac is too quiet Brooke almost fell Tucker's corpse is blocked by Sydney at the end
In redneck scene we are too heavy on USL.
ReplyDeleteSong was good in funeral scene.
"Shall we gather" could be louder though.
"I'm gonna kill him" did not seem like a threat.
BBQ scene is balanced well.
Watch straight line in BBQ.
I need to work on sitting on other side of bench in first Jack and Adam scene, it looked awkward.
Wait for snap then freeze, don't anticipate!
I need to remember to grab scrapbook.
Hospital crowd made no noise!
Everyone needs to work on southern accent, it sounds like plain English and then someone will say "stock".
I need to work on in sherrif scene being "suthun" instead of "southERn".
Singing is really good in all scenes.
Gunshot in suicide was amazing!
Singing before murder scene needs to be louder.
Need to work on reacting to being shot.
ashlynn needs to be louder on her first line. everyone needs to be faster during the first transition and more happy. Jonah needs to hold up the newspaper longer during the redneck scene. Pretend there are bugs in the redneck scene and crowd scenes. those are the perfect times for us to show the location and the climate of our play. brooke needs to walk in the funeral scene with an umbrella! Make sure everyone is frozen during funeral part because it looks bad if one person moves. Sydney be louder when you say "ain't it awful". There is a SEMI CIRCLE DURING FIRST SPEECH. what's going on with Adam and Jack scene?? there were no flashes during the picture. Tristian don't being flags out during the scene. we are anticipating the flashes and I think it ruins it. I love them but we have to perfect it. tucker don't introduce yourself because Brodie does and it sounds wierd if you say it too many times. floating newspaper??? lol
ReplyDeleteTristian and Jonah more people noises during the redneck scene when you first walk in
ReplyDeleteJonah say your first line faster in the good speech
Tucker take the scrapbook
Don't move the flags during the scene
Don't anticipate the flashes during the hospital speech
Tucker why are you randomly standing there
Brodie have busy work during Adam's and Willie's scene
Louder on sing humpy dumbty at end
Left stage in heavy at the end
Kadyn blocks Payton in the beginning
ReplyDeleteI need to slow down
Typing sounds bad
NO people noises from the rednecks
Tucker is all profile as the sheriff
Austin is the only one who is feeling bugs
Austin and Jonah are blocked
There is a long delay between the redneck scene the next scene
Thunder is really loud
You can see Austin catch Brooke
Singing sounds good
You can see some people moving during the freeze
Payton just leavess Mac on the stage
Mac needs to cheat more
Sydney needs to be louder "You've been framed"
Sydney suddenly starts flirting with him during that last line
Girls all walk really loudly
Really straight line during good speech
Why did Payton suddenly put down her sign after Mac's line about it?
Sign is moving during freeze
Moving the bench is really loud
Really long pause between "I quit" and the next scene
Tucker's jacket is really awkward
Lost the end of Sydney's line "Caught with his finger..."
Andrew is completely profile
Strikers need to be louder and have more
Sydney is completely profile
Brodie putting his leg on the chair looks really staged
Sydney seducing him is really good
Transition to hospital speech is long and quiet
Can not hear oohs in the beginning
Why was there a flash of blue light across the flag?
Kadyn is talking upstage
Kadyn is completely profile
Transition before Two Timing needs to be faster
Sydney and Brodie are both entirely profile
Really good freeze Kadyn
Brodie is profile again
We lose the end of Mac's line about air conditioning
Jonah is profile
Why is Tucker randomly standing in the back?
Sydney needs to cross at her ankles
Brodie and Tucker are all profile
Tucker's line about "lions and tigers" seems rehearsed
Tucker has a noodle arm for a moment
Be more happy about Tucker accepting the job
Brodie react more to "I think he killed himself"
Quiet setting props and set on stage
Maky turning in her chair looks staged
Maky gets really quite sometimes
Why is Austin not in the light?
Floating newspaper?
Austin is talking upstage
Really good suicide
Ashlynn is too quiet
Ashlynn suddenly gained an deeper accent during her second line
Austin needs to be louder during his monologue
Mac is too quiet
Brooke almost fell
Tucker's corpse is blocked by Sydney at the end
In the good speech there is a line, keep signs from swaying, still a pause of sound when willie is coming in during the flashes, random flags, everyone including me had our acsents here and there and lost them all of a sudden, a huge pause before hospital speech, Sadie and Jack scene could have stated a little faster,Jake and Willie take to long in their short conversation, good job Jack and Sadie for smoking took to long getting to Adam, Jack. no one is acting like its hot in the second half of the play, Adam and his blank sheet of paper,good gunshot,
ReplyDeleteSnaps need to be more peppy. I need to pull more anger into my line.i also need to be more emotional in the funeral scene. Be more of a crowd. The hue scene drags. Good singing.ending was awesome!
ReplyDeleteStage picture after the funeral scene was good songs all sounded a little quiet jack Adam and Anne's first scene was awkward his truth was marching on was awkward transitions were rough
ReplyDeleteIf you cant hum high enough, don’t hum at all during humpty dumpty ( just during the high part)
ReplyDeleteHeavy left stage during redneck scene
Louder at the beginning of shall we gather at the river
Bigger reaction to us being called a hick
We are in a line at the good speech
We need “the governor” during the first flash
Protesting needs to be longer! Accents
Hospital transition was awful.
Jonah don’t trip on the chair
Quieter glass setting before judge scene
Be more mad during “Maybe Im trying to protect myself
Look out into the crowd and decide to kill myself
Be louder on last humpty dumpty
Tucker is blocking maky's sign at beginning
ReplyDeleteAndrew- you look not sweaty
Brodie- "pinch em in the soft place" when you say it first, make stand out so when you say it a second time, people remember it
Everyone- be happy at the picnic laugh, talk, and murmur
Austin and Tristian- cross when Mac says "tell you a story" so there isn't a shadow on macs face while he's taking
Ashlynn- good at making different characters
Nathan- be angrier when you hit clipboard
Jonah- no hats in office
Everyone- react to resignation
Impeachers- other people gripe other than woody and Austin
Sydnie- beginning of "two timing" line be
stronger
Jonah- under the table beer??
And react to "not a penny of it"
Brodie- watch Jonah and Mac fight and laugh
Tucker- you look silly with the big tie
Brodie- big evidence with "a letter"
Tucker- no big weird movements in the back
Snaps need to be more energetic.
ReplyDeleteWoody don't sway so much during redneck scene. Funeral scene needs to show more emotion nobody looks like they are truly sad they lost so many innocent children. When it rains and y'all put down the umbrellas shake them a little bit so they can "dry". I forgot the lights I was helping them change :(. A line is going on in the drunk speech. Maki don't let the sign move when you are frozen. Protesters are not mad enough. Payton don't have sign in front of face during hospital speech we can't see your face.
COMMENT FOR THE BLOG
ReplyDeletemake sure brooks sign doesn't block Ashlynn at the beginning
People noises before bbq scene it is really awkward
Line/semi circle in bbq scene
Sign frozen in bbq scene (mine)
Adams jacket looks awkward
Entrance to the hospital scene is very delayed, it's after "he can't do without me" be loud sound gets lost, and have people noises all the way until we start humming
Humpty dumpty needs to be louder before kill scene
•heels more quiet
ReplyDelete• humming needs to be together��
•some accents are thicker than others. It sounds kinda weird but I don't know if it's bad
•I think we can shave off some time of we step on each other's lines a bit better
•during the play we talk to the same people each crowd scene and I know I'm bad at that. So we need to talk to different people each time
•crowd scenes in a line
•more excitement in crowds
•I ❤️ The photo scenes!!!!
•the Hue scene drags....
•some transitions are poop
•more contact with people
•stand up straight!!!(I'm prob the worst)
•more feeling during heart felt scenes!!!!!!
•Brody sounds mean but doesn't look mean
•judge scene is heart felt but drags
•Ashlynn needs to be more sad but good accent
-Brooke
the snaps definite need to me happier songs were good... the oooooh one during macs hospital speech need improvement. we need quicker transitions!!!
ReplyDeleteBrodie dont be facing mac before your first line so you have to suddenly have to turn around. alot of people are anticipating their lines
ReplyDeletePayton and mac give a full hug and not just a side hug
show the heat
Sadie be flirty in the way you walk
Brodie practice the song
Crowd needs to be chatting more
Kadyn needs to be farther back when she fixes her makeup
Kadyn needs to be more comfortable walking in heels!
Mac stand still you are being wobbly on your feet
Brodie work on having a softer voice when talking to girls
Brodie you are profile the whole time during the two timing scene
Jonah don't go back to look behind the flag
Kadyn keep your feet together even while sitting on the desk
Brodie why did you lean you head so far back?
If you have a trench coat on take it off it is hot
Brodie you are only moving you hands below your waist
Sadie find something to do besides put your cigar in your mouth
Maky be more shaky
Brodie let us see your reaction to killing your father in yoir body language
Jacob you are slouched and it does not look good!
Ladies shoes are really loud
Brodie dont be facing mac before your first line so you have to suddenly have to turn around
Jonah you were anticipating your line
Brodie you lost your accent... Keep it constant everyone!
Okay, alot of people are anticipating their lines
Payton and mac give a full hug and not just a side hug, show your love for one another
Brodie i do not see you showing the heat
Everyone is running in then like halfway yall all slow down
Sadie be flirty in the way you walk
Brodie practice the last note of the its you I'm thinking of...
Crowd needs to be chatting where we can barely hear it all throughout the crowd scenes
Crowd was not being very enthusiastic
Nathan your pisture is getting better!
Kadyn needs to be farther back when she fixes her makeup
Kadyn needs to be more comfortable walking in heels!
Mac stand still you are being wobbly on your feet
Brodie work on having a softer voice when talking to girls
Brodie you are profile the whole time during the two timing scene
Jonah don't go back to look behind the flag
Kadyn keep your feet together even while sitting on the desk
Brodie why did you lean you head so far back?
If you have a trench coat on take it off it is hot
Brodie you are only moving you hands below your waist
Sadie find something to do besides put your cigar in your mouth every two seconds
Maky be more shaky
Brodie let us see your reaction to killing your father in yoir body language
Jacob you are slouched and it does not look good!
Ladies shoes are really loud
Brodie dont be facing mac before your first line so you have to suddenly have to turn around
Jonah you were anticipating your line
Brodie you lost your accent... Keep it constant everyone!
Okay, alot of people are anticipating their lines
Payton and mac give a full hug and not just a side hug, show your love for one another
Brodie i do not see you showing the heat
Everyone is running in then like halfway yall all slow down
Sadie be flirty in the way you walk
Brodie practice the last note of the its you I'm thinking of...
Crowd needs to be chatting where we can barely hear it all throughout the crowd scenes
Crowd was not being very enthusiastic
Nathan your pisture is getting better!
Kadyn needs to be farther back when she fixes her makeup
Kadyn needs to be more comfortable walking in heels!
Mac stand still you are being wobbly on your feet
Brodie work on having a softer voice when talking to girls
Brodie you are profile the whole time during the two timing scene
Jonah don't go back to look behind the flag
Kadyn keep your feet together even while sitting on the desk
Brodie why did you lean you head so far back?
If you have a trench coat on take it off it is hot
Brodie you are only moving you hands below your waist
Sadie find something to do besides put your cigar in your mouth every two seconds
Maky be more shaky
Brodie let us see your reaction to killing your father in yoir body language
Jacob you are slouched and it does not look good!
Kadyn blocks Payton in the beginning
ReplyDeleteI need to slow down
Typing sounds bad
NO people noises from the rednecks
Tucker is all profile as the sheriff
Austin is the only one who is feeling bugs
Austin and Jonah are blocked
There is a long delay between the redneck scene the next scene
Thunder is really loud
You can see Austin catch Brooke
Singing sounds good
You can see some people moving during the freeze
Payton just leavess Mac on the stage
Mac needs to cheat more
Sydney needs to be louder "You've been framed"
Sydney suddenly starts flirting with him during that last line
Girls all walk really loudly
Really straight line during good speech
Why did Payton suddenly put down her sign after Mac's line about it?
Sign is moving during freeze
Moving the bench is really loud
Really long pause between "I quit" and the next scene
Tucker's jacket is really awkward
Lost the end of Sydney's line "Caught with his finger..."
Andrew is completely profile
Strikers need to be louder and have more
Sydney is completely profile
Brodie putting his leg on the chair looks really staged
Sydney seducing him is really good
Transition to hospital speech is long and quiet
Can not hear oohs in the beginning
Why was there a flash of blue light across the flag?
Kadyn is talking upstage
Kadyn is completely profile
Transition before Two Timing needs to be faster
Sydney and Brodie are both entirely profile
Really good freeze Kadyn
Brodie is profile again
We lose the end of Mac's line about air conditioning
Jonah is profile
Why is Tucker randomly standing in the back?
Sydney needs to cross at her ankles
Brodie and Tucker are all profile
Tucker's line about "lions and tigers" seems rehearsed
Tucker has a noodle arm for a moment
Be more happy about Tucker accepting the job
Brodie react more to "I think he killed himself"
Quiet setting props and set on stage
Maky turning in her chair looks staged
Maky gets really quite sometimes
Why is Austin not in the light?
Floating newspaper?
Austin is talking upstage
Really good suicide
Ashlynn is too quiet
Ashlynn suddenly gained an deeper accent during her second line
Austin needs to be louder during his monologue
Mac is too quiet
Brooke almost fell
Tucker's corpse is blocked by Sydney at the end