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Everyone	·         Shall we gather at the river must be loud at the get go. ·         First freeze not good. ·         There was fifteen seconds between music (freeze) and bad speech. ·         It is HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bugs are biting.  Horseflies are as big as horses. ·         No one can walk behind Willie with the red scrim. ·         There was 8 seconds between Anne singing exiting the beach scene to Willie’s hello Jack. ·         It is your right – freeze – click of camera and lights ·         Do you  hear me? – freeze – click of camera and lights. ·         After the good speech, carry Willie out. ·         At the end.  Sugar Boy move a little LS so that Jack has room to get up. Jack rises first.  On his first step, everyone unfreezes.
CROWD	·         Traditional remedy – crowd go out then (15 seconds lapse) ·         Choose to call sorry – crowd go out. ·         Something will turn up – picketers go USL and CSL freeze  until your name will be mud. ·         Sadie – he can’t do WITHOUT me- go out.  30 sec. lapse ·         Between Jack’s I quit and the start of the Adam, Anne, Jack scene there was a 33 second lapse. ·         Sadie and Jack’s 3 timing scene, start singing immediately.
Women	·         Purses and skirts – all women and use the purses.  We will put handkerchiefs,
Men	·         Hats caps & tip them to ladies.  Let ladies go first. ·         If you are wearing a suit, you need to either carry your jacket or have it over your shoulder. Exception – Nathan as paperboy.
Hugh and Tiny	More emotional at funeral scene – think about the racial conflicts we have had recently with police in US.   The protesters were not stating facts.  They were emotional – over the top.
Lucy- look at pauses -//	I taught six years and nobody ever said I wasn’t all right,// but now they write a letter and say there are complaints about my work. //(Change) I don’t want to teach in a schoolhouse they build just so somebody can steal some money.// (Change) And Willie doesn’t want to be County Treasurer either, if he has to associate with those dishonest people.
Sadie	More direct – Joe Harrison …..state the facts.  Hit the verbs. More seductive with men.
Judge	Coordinate outfits with Mom.
Jack	Look at your book to jog your memory.  React to different memories – some before … some after. When Tiny starts walking off (Star Spangled Banner) – get Sadie to look. Pinch em in the ….. when he does it – react – a clap – clasped hands
Mom	Work on your lines after phone call. Disheveled after phone call.
Bench people – decide who is doing this – can be several, but it needs to be done in character.	·         Willie Stark is from nowhere – cross USL to DSC. Scrapbook on the bench. ·         At the beginning of the hospital speech, move the bench with cloth and leaves in front of the trunks DLS, then move it to CS before Jack and Anne’s scene. Cross left stage. Move bench after the scene. ·         Move judge’s bench and table and decanters, etc. during Lily’s scene. Do it in character.  Move USR or CSR to DSR.
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Anne	Don’t back up and put up hands with – I’m sorry scene.
Music & Carly’s lights	Thunder after Willie exits before Anne and Jack talk about her relationship with Willie. Bueprint scene – thunder and lightning.
Willie	Don’t touch Adam’s face.  You are trying to woo him, but you can’t help but be sarcastic at the sterile hospital, etc. line.
Willie - Sadie	We need to see you make your decision or see that it is clarified in your last office scene.  You can move Sadie – say something to her, etc. must be quick.
Adam	React angrily with the hospital line…. We have to see your need to be head of the hospital top Willie’s insults.  You are angry when Jack stops you.
Lights	Quitting certain things – quick light change.
Willie , Tiny, Dolph, Jack	Cut Dolph’s line in the last scene -