Thursday, January 22, 2015

January 22 -dissection of the play


Authentic emotion is a by-product of doing something else- of pursuing a goal, of playing an action.

 

Scene
Action
Event
Climax
Emotion
Goal
1.       The Memory
Intro
 
 
Intro
 
Spider
Bittersweet
Angry wanting love
Disbelief
Warning
Mom –Justifying
Judge
Coercing
Willie wonders how he strayed
Jack warning
2.       The Endorsement
Telling Jack to go to Mason County
 
 
 
Discussion at job
They run em
Excitement
Retorting
Agreeing
Editor needs news
Jack wants to get a story he is interested in.
3.       The Rednecks
Go to Mason County
 
 
 
Town meeting place
Reading the article
Tense
Contentious
Jack – wants answers about the high bid.
Rednecks want to keep blacks out of jobs they want
Sheriff – wants to see why a reporter is there
Pillsbury –justifying commissioners stand
4.       The Baptists
Get acquainted with Starks
 
 
 
Farm
I won’t quit
Welcoming
Thoughtful
Sad
Curious
Defiant
Jack – wants the truth
Willie-wants to be treasurer
Lucy-does not want Willie to run and she wants Jack to know how dishonest the commissioners are.
5.       The Defeat
Memory
 
 
 
 
Run pic on front page
Jubilant
Admitting defeat
Willie – wants truth known
Editor –wants more readers
6.       Mason County Funeral
Mourning children
 
 
Cemetery
 
Now has Mason C in palm of hand
Sad
Jubilant
Surprised
Disbelief
 
 
 
 
 
townspeople –to express sorrow
Man – wants it known -blaming himself for not voting for Willie
Jack – announces support
7.       Bad Speech
Selling Stark
 
 
townsquare
 
Tell the boys
Boring
Not confident
frustration
empathy
disgust
Willie-wants people to listen
Jack – wants the stumping to end
Sadie – wants the speech to end.
8.       The Drunk
 
To rectify
 
Hotel room
Framed?
Sadness
Disbelief
anger
Willie – wants to make a difference
Jack  wants to help Willie
Sadie wants to get it over with
9.       Hair of the Dog
Retaliate
 
 
Hotel room
I’m going
Angry
determined
Willie is determined to go Jack wants to support him
 
10.   Upton Barbeque
Revenge
 
 
Bar B Q area
Tell a story & Reveal Tiny
Disbelief
Excitement
Willie is determined to make people listen and identify with him & to reveal the truth
Jack – wants to support him
Sadie changes alliances
Tiny wants to leave & Quiet Willie.
 
11.   I quit
Order
 
 
 
 
News office
Support MacMurfee
Urging
conflict
Editor to get Jack to support MacMurfee
Jack wants to write his way
12.   Old Friends
Good Times
Reunite
 
 
 
Burden’s Landing
I’m not talking about your family
Happy
Hurt
Anger
contrite
Adam wants the three to be like they were
Jack wants more from Anne
Anne wants Jack to change
13.   Job of a Lifetime
To reunite with Willie
 
 
 
Capitol steps
Do you want a job?
Happy
Excited
 
Willie wants Jack to take the job
Jack wants to see Willie and congratulate him.
Between 13 & 15, W is elected and impeachment proceedings start.
3 years have passed
 
 
 
 
14.   Pushy Mother
To see people he hasn’t seen in a while.
 
 
Burden’s Landing
For 3 years, ……
Obligated to visit
Excitement
Anger
disappointment
Mom wants a visit & for Jack to do what she wants him to
Jack wants to visit without problems
15.   Starting Impeachment
Scene of the Crime
To regroup
Willie’s office & Hugh resigns
Byram White can commit….
Anger
Panicked
Sad
Disillusioned
S – wants to protect Willie & wants info.
J- tries to understand the change in Willie
W –wants to keep Hugh
H-gives an ultimatum & quits
 
16.   The Vision
Announce and gain support
 
 
 
Capitol steps – announcing hospital
I’ll break him
Anger
Passion
Threatening
W- get support from the people (voters)
17.   The Old Maid
Get info and try to start over
 
 
 
Burden’s Landing
What about your reputation?
Interrogation
anger
Sadness
 
Anne wants Jack to understand and accept
Jack wants info and wants Anne
 
 
 
 
18.   Three Timing
To placate
 
 
 
Meeting reveals affair
Thought she was yours
Frustration
Humor
Anger
Disbelief
sadness
Jack wants to quit Willie
Sadie wants Jack’s support to keep Anne and Willie apart.
19.   The Good ol Days
Remember the good times
 
 
 
Burden’s Landing
Marry me
Humor
Love
Reluctance
Love
Jack wants marriage
Anne wants Jack’s love
20.   Fed Up
(Jack & Willie need different clothes)
Placating
interrogating
 
 
Willy’s office
J & W reunite
He wants to marry me
Anger
Humor
Excitement
Sadness
Willie wants to find out what’s wrong with Jack
Jack wants to know why Anne is ruining her life
Anne wants Jack to understand.
21.   Six Million Bucks
Plans to spend 6 mil on hospital
 
 
Willie’s office
Quitting Gummy Larsen and hiring Adam
Excited
Disbelief
Anger
Order
Resigned
Belligerent
Willie wants Adam to run the hospital
Jack wants to understand
Sadie is trying to understand
Tiny wants to keep Larsen
22.   The Offer
Wants to hire Adam
 
 
 
Adam’s apartment
You want to do good
Happy
Reluctance
Stubborn
Agree
 
 
 
Adam wants Jack to understand
Jack wants Adam to commit
23.   The Introduction
Hiring Adam
 
 
Willie’s office
I won’t stand interference
Tense
Sarcasm
Threatening
Worry
Anxious
Disbelief
Jack wants information
Willie wants Adam
Adam wants reassurance
Sadie wants what Willie wants.
24.   The Secret
Interviewing
 
 
 
Lilly’s apartment
She has the letter
Nervous
Almost antagonistic
Resigned.
Lilly wants justice
Jack wants the truth now for himself, not Willie
25.   Digging
Final threat
 
Meeting in Willie’s office
 
I’m not framing …
Distrust
Anger
Willie wants information
Jack doesn’t want to see the Judge hurt.
26.   Betrayal
Wanting the truth
 
 
 
Burden’s Landing
Letter
Happy
Uneasy
Conflicting
Disbelief
Betrayal
Sad
Judge wants Jack’s love and forgiveness
Jack wants an excuse to not believe Lilly
27.   Death
To announce
 
 
 
Burden’s Landing & Willie’s office
You Killed him
Anger
Broken heart
Humor sad
Betrayal
Accusation
Mother wants to blame Jack
Jack wants to make it go away
Willie sees a problem solved.
28.   Memories of the Judge
Memory
 
 
 
Memory
 
Sad
Anger
Acceptance
Longing
Mom wants forgiveness
Judge wants forgiveness
Jack wants to believe the old Willie
29.   Humpty Dumpty
To Change
 
 
 
The speech at the capitol
 
Killings
Hope
forgiveness
Willie wanted to change
Tiny wants to partner with Gummy
Jack wants to believe the old Willie
30.   Hope
Hoping
 
 
 
Memory
 
Summary
Jack wants to believe in a better life and wants to be optimistic about the country and humanity.

1 comment:

  1. Remember not to block the stage lights from the point of action

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